Still to Do

The Otherwise Novels

Still to Do

Mara Vale can close almost anything.

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The story

What waits inside

A returned library book becomes a tortoise. An avoided apology grows teeth. A promise to call home turns into a hound that howls at telephones. Mara works for the city’s Completion Service, where competence means clean forms, empty pens, and no creature left hungry overnight.

Her own animal is another matter.

It sleeps beneath her desk, too large to register and still growing. It came from the promise Mara made after their mother’s death: she would care for her younger sister, Inez, forever. The vow made Mara reliable. It also made Inez the object of a duty she never chose.

Now the mayor has ordered every long-term animal inspected. Mara’s director wants zero backlog. Inez wants a life that does not belong on her sister’s caseload. And the creature is becoming impossible to hide.

To keep the person she loves, how much of her promise must Mara be willing to lose?

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Chapter 01: Completion Service · page 1 of 10

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Pressure arrived at noon in the form of a city-wide alert on both their tablets. Sera's face in a still frame, bright makeup, severe mouth. Text under it: Mayor confirms zero-backlog mandate. All long-term animals subject to census inspection within fourteen days. Owner failure classification applies to unfinishable cases without approved extension.

Tom read it twice. "Owner failure. That's a knife dressed as a form."

Mara's mind went, uninvited, to the desk in her office and the breathing under it. Unfinishable. Owner failure. The words fit her like a uniform issued one size too honest.

She had. On his first month, when he still flinched at every snap of teeth, she had shown him a chart: delayed completion correlated with mass gain in seventy percent of species. Care without closure was still care; it just cost more feed, more space, more lies to landlords about "emotional support livestock."

They finished the route: a missing-tool ferret returned with the wrench in its mouth; a birthday-forgot peacock that shed one gaudy feather for each sincere message sent; a tax form that had become a moth and died in a shaft of sun when the filing went through. Ordinary miracles of municipal life. Mara's amusement returned in small doses, the professional kind, until the last stop.

The last stop was a woman whose animal was a quiet, heavy thing like a rolled carpet with eyes. Long-term. Unregistered properly. The woman lived two blocks from Mara's building.

Book details

Series
The Otherwise Novels
Availability
In development
Language
English
Publisher
LPH98.lifestyle
Author
L.P.H. Nordhaven
Reading order
A complete standalone novel